Comments: #2

Natalie called this link-art, but we need a term that includes your visual and verbal haikus.

Notice that there are several poems here, contingent on revealed or unrevealed links.

If someone didn't click on branch, they wouldn't get the emotional key to this beautifully illustrated short poem.

And what's with the UFO over the giraffe???


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Posted by underlyingreality at November 27, 2004 07:30 PM

Really -

I have to confess, the UFO is photoshopped. I knew you would notice, but you have failed to comment on the symbolism.

In eager anticipation. D

Posted by Dakota at November 28, 2004 07:16 AM

ok

symbolism

early
oral
stage
devouring

reptile
mind
control

symbolism?

down
the
hatch

fear
falling

here

damn that's difficult

Posted by underlyingreality at November 28, 2004 04:27 PM

Completely fabulous! You made me laugh out loud.

Don't tell me it's difficult though -- time consuming perhaps.

Really, what a pleasure it is to have a peek into your unconscious -- enticingly primitive, while classically Freudian with neurophysiological overtones touched by the spirit of a romantic yogic sailor. Right up my alley .

Welcome to the Society of Long Poem Practitioners.

Appreciatively, D.

Posted by Dakota at November 28, 2004 08:40 PM

Touche.

No, it's a lot harder to make poetry out of it like you do.

Posted by underlyingreality at November 28, 2004 09:31 PM
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